last week we learned about narrative writing and what is the purpose of it and we had to do these story and explain the idea the main problem and how they fixed it then we had to fill out some of those then we made to make up our own little narrative at the end.
Awesome effort Pyper - you appear to have a very good understanding of the TOPS narrative structure. Perhaps to make your narrative more descriptive, try to incorporate a range of interesting vocabulary relating to the 5 senses. Keep up the great work! - Mrs T
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